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I'm reaching out to someone anyone
I am anxiety ridden
I feel the walls around me are crashing down
Mom- I'm making myself throw up to see if my problems disappear
why cant you hear my yells for help?
Dad- I am about to do something I am about to regret
it's the only way I can release torture that's inside, slit my wist
why cant you hear my yells for help?
Sis- I'm about to chug this bottle to try to disappear
why cant you hear my yells for help?
Bro- please I'm about to take these pills where I can leave this life
why cant you hear my yells for help?
Can you hear my yells for help now when you are looking at me six feet under
I am anxiety ridden
I feel the walls around me are crashing down
Mom- I'm making myself throw up to see if my problems disappear
why cant you hear my yells for help?
Dad- I am about to do something I am about to regret
it's the only way I can release torture that's inside, slit my wist
why cant you hear my yells for help?
Sis- I'm about to chug this bottle to try to disappear
why cant you hear my yells for help?
Bro- please I'm about to take these pills where I can leave this life
why cant you hear my yells for help?
Can you hear my yells for help now when you are looking at me six feet under
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what about him?
he cries, but no-one hears,
they shelter themselves from his pain,
they think he's a nuisance,
they ignore his cries,
He screams, but no one hears,
but they still feel his cold breath as it hits them,
they don't care, they won't embrace him,
what if i were to cry?
what if i screamed?
they would care for me,
maybe only from pity,
but that would be better than nothing,
he has nothing,
no-one to care for him,
no-one to even pity him,
no-one.
his name?
The sky
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Why do I care when she doesn't talk to me?
Why do I care when she doesn't talk to me? It's not like it matters, it's not like it's hurting me...
Well, no, maybe that isn't true. It is hurting me. Why does it hurt me? It shouldn't matter that she isn't talking to me. It's not a big deal. It's not like she's ignoring me...
What if she's ignoring me? Is she ignoring me? She tells me she's busy. I believe her I really do, but there's always this part of me that tells me I'm just annoying. Why would someone want to talk to me? I'm not good enough...
I'm never good enough. I push myself, put so much pressure on myself. People tell me I'm good at things, but I can't see it. I can't belie
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Always
Alone upon the hill,
you stand.
Winters hand,
grips your limbs,
cold wind ripping,
at your core.
Just a shadow of yourself,
stands before the world.
But fear not,
soon winters hold,
will be burnt sunder.
Once more the light,
will fill your core.
Once more you shall bloom,
once more the beauty,
in you shall shine.
and know this,
alone you shall never stand,
for no matter were,
no matter what.
Be it light,
be it dark.
You shall always,
have a freind,
in me
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So I have been researching what it would take to to get my book published and here are the steps that I need to take:
1) hire a literacy agent
2)travel when I get an interview with that agent
3) get my poetry into book form
That saying it is going to be a lot of money and I really want to do this. Even if I just help one person to realize hey you not a lone in the things you are going through. I do not want people to go down the dark path I went down.
So I have made this website to get my book out there if you guys could help I would really appreciate it even if you just share this on your page
thank you so much
Here is the link
www.gofundme.com/chpyw4
1) hire a literacy agent
2)travel when I get an interview with that agent
3) get my poetry into book form
That saying it is going to be a lot of money and I really want to do this. Even if I just help one person to realize hey you not a lone in the things you are going through. I do not want people to go down the dark path I went down.
So I have made this website to get my book out there if you guys could help I would really appreciate it even if you just share this on your page
thank you so much
Here is the link
www.gofundme.com/chpyw4
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Hey there,
Prettyflour here on behalf of
with the critique your requested.
You've written something very straight-forward and bold. You tell a story that I think will be relatable to many, sadly. Having said that, I'm glad to hear that you aren't thinking about harming yourself, but that you've chosen to use a hard experience and channel your emotions into poetry.
If I had any constructive feedback to offer it is that I think this poem could benefit from the use of more punctuation. You've used question marks in some lines and no other punctuation. I think that using periods or commas would help with the overall flow of the piece. My two cents.
Keep writing. It's a healthy way to express any and all emotions.
Prettyflour here on behalf of
with the critique your requested.You've written something very straight-forward and bold. You tell a story that I think will be relatable to many, sadly. Having said that, I'm glad to hear that you aren't thinking about harming yourself, but that you've chosen to use a hard experience and channel your emotions into poetry.
If I had any constructive feedback to offer it is that I think this poem could benefit from the use of more punctuation. You've used question marks in some lines and no other punctuation. I think that using periods or commas would help with the overall flow of the piece. My two cents.
Keep writing. It's a healthy way to express any and all emotions.